Wednesday, April 27, 2011

#6 Meatrix

  Probably, most people might not know about factory farms around 10 years ago. Most of them can just buy many kinds of meats at cheap prices everywhere in U.S. and they still enjoy eating the meat. However, some documentaries about factory farms came out from a few years ago and many people in around world saw these. People who saw the documentaries would not eat meat more frequently than before because the truth of factory farms is enough to make that people feel disgusting. I am also one of them and I want to be a vegetarian after watching the documentary.

  The Meatrix shows about how to raise animals with the conditions of factory farms and how to process them at meat packing plant. The big space of factory farms is in a compact mass with cows, pigs and chickens. Moreover, they did not have even tiny space to move. What was worse, beak of chicken is cut so as to prevent fighting of chickens. Also, for the animals fed in there are exposed diseases, all of them are taken dosages of antibiotics. Dairy cows are bred for high milk production by injecting hormones in their body. If some of animals can not be used to make products, they are sent to slaughter. Finally, the animals are processed with speed at meat packing plant. These are not all. Factory farms also make serious pollution. Animals' manure and urine are moved into waste tarn and the tarn emits toxic gases such as ammonia and methane.

  I think the U.S. government should make strict regulations to prevent environment. It is in a serious level and animals in factory farms would give us harmful influences. Due to greedy of agriculture companies, we are losing our heath and environment. But companies do not recognize what is more important than getting benefits. Whenever I buy some eggs and milk, I have chosen organic things, but I can not believe whether these are really organic. By watching the meatrix, I do not want to eat any meat and fast food for a while.

  In conclusion, all of the people in around world should know about factory farms. If all know about it's problems, they are going to prefer family farm's products. The people who made factory farms should know that even their families are also able to eat their harmful products.

13 comments:

  1. Well description! Actually, this is my assignment to comment, but I think this assignment is great because I read the best post ever. Your post made my day. Great structure and awesome points! It's nice to read your post. Thanks!

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  2. I agree with that, because everything is good. you have very clear about meatrix, and you have good opinion.

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  3. This is a good post because I agree with this opinion that the big space of factory farms is in a compact mass with cows, pigs and chickens. Moreover, they did not have even tiny space to move.This is a very good opinion.

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  4. After reading your blog, I think I will become a vegetarian as well >.< ; I totally agree with you, these farmers are killing our environment. They need to end this as soon as possible, to have a better world. U.S government should take actions. These companies needs to be shut down A.S.A.P ! xD
    Thanks for sharing your ideas & thoughts, It was interesting to read :D

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  5. I agree with that, because everything is good. you have very clear about meatrix, and you have good opinion.

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  6. I agree with you because people who saw the documentaries would not eat meat .

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  7. I agree with you that we should know the fact about food farming. I really enjoyed reading your blog.

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  8. You have summarized the film and given your opinon that the government should do something about factory farms. Your essay structure is very good and the argument is clear. I like your essay.

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  10. you have a good essay. you have good summary and your own opinion. I strongly agree with you in addition, I want to become a vegetarian after reading your essay.

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  11. I guess she was very specific in her description and easy to understand. I will approve her because I see that she has a good knowledge how should be an organized essay. I strongly agree with her when she mentioned that after watching that documentary people prefer to become a vegetarian because of the following reason: we observed the cruelty in those poor animals antibiotic over use and artificial hormones which caused mad cow decease. that's why it was in the thought for most of consumers.

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  12. I strongly agree with your point of view. And you clear state the thesis in the introduction paragraph. Also, you support your opinion with your own experience.

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  13. I believe you have a good essay. You give your opinion and thought about what you think of the situation. I see good punctuation marks placed correctly and well grammer as well. You wrote this essay making and grabbing others attention to want to make them read it too.

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